We have been learning to write narrative story's here is my story of message in a bottle.
One day, I was walking down New Brighton beach then I saw a message in a bottle but then the Ocean took it away so I went in the Ocean to get it, but then some bad guys came along and tried to get it.
I went up to them and fought them, then they fell down so Iran to get the bottle. I got the bottle and read it this is what it said,
Hi im Coco, Im 12 years old. My favourite colour is yellow, I come from Australia. If you receive this bottle show it to one friend or come to Australia and see me, Coco.
So i went to Australia to see Coco. Then someone came up to me and said Im Coco did you find my message in a bottle? I said Yes! Coco said come with me, So I came with her. She took me to a cave it lit up golden She gave me a box with a prize inside. I opened the box and it was a beanie boo and a pack of lollies. Then Coco asked do you want to be friends Yes ! i said then we were BFF s
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