Wednesday, 25 November 2020

Super tiny Summer in class

 One spooky night someone shrunk me. I don't know  who It was!

Ummmm… What should I be careful of?

  1. The chairs

  2. The toilets and its smell

  3. The stuff on the pray table  

  4. My school supplies

  5. My Chromebook shutting (By itself) 

First I banged into the door. 

Secondly I got stuck in the mat. 

Then I got trapped in the Chrome book And I lifted  it up.

Next I Got trapped in a bag then someone saw me and put me in the rubbish bin.


                        The end

                         By Summer
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  1. Miss Esselink25 November 2020 at 15:10

    Summer,

    Well done. I especially descriptive words in your title and opening sentence to hook the reader in. Great to see you using different sentence starters (first, then, next, secondly). Your next step is to see if you can add more detail into each sentence. How did it feel getting trapped? What was it like? Why?

    Miss Esselink

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